Book of usProject: The book of Us is, a book that my classmates and I created. Everyone in our class has written a piece on something that matters to them. This is such a huge topic and that's why I think so many people have so many different stories which makes this book so interesting!
https://docs.google.com/a/hightechhigh.org/document/d/1H-aTIS-dfQOtGVq4Lk2JrGTr-XSDp23ODs_zmwp7Nyk/edit This picture shows me giving a little run though in front of the classroom. Doing this I had to ask questions to Deeza and Brandon to see what their responses is. I think this went pretty well it was good practice for everyone.
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Reflection: Something I wanted to write about when the project just got started is about how my friend and I got stuck in a rip tide. I think my ideas changed from my first draft to my last because I felt like in my first draft I was just telling a story. Which changed a lot in my last you can really feel like you were there. I really made sure that I wasn't just telling a story. I didn't want to make my read bored when they were going through the story. I feel like one other thing is you understand everything that happens I don't feel like there is ever an empty gap. The feedback I got was mainly on grammar and changing a few sentences. Something I plan on is making sure my grammar is close to perfect so I can worry more about how my writing is formed and what sentences I may need to change to make that happen. I think something I would change is the ended I think I kind of just left it blank, I mean you still figured out what happened but it wasn't as detailed.
Links: Final Draft , Down Draft , Mentor text , Golden lines. |
This is one quick write we have done. These quick writes have helped me out a lot, in the end they helped me to figure out what I want my story to be.
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